Would you be interested in giving your thoughts on a poem of mine?

It's an odd bit of writing, Elves and lecherous notes, dark demon wolves and plague of Satan, oaken home and lips laminated with blood, naked angels on ice and Lucifer. Unfortunately with all the allusion that couldn't be parsed, and the over the top abstraction, I have no idea what you are getting at. Try showing with specific images and concrete language, show don't tell, if you're using your own allusions explain what they are...poetry is not a riddle, it is communication.